6 Mayıs 2010 Perşembe

WRONGS OF THE EDUCATION SYSTEM

There are many problems in our country in Turkey. Almost every system is broken. However governers say there is no problem about the country. But ; I want to talk about the wrongs of education system.
First of all; our fault is coming from the primary schools. We’re trying to teach every student same things. We’re thinking every student can learn and success all of the courses. However; everyone is not the same and don’t have the same brains. We don’t try to seperate the students for their abilities. Many European Countries are applying this method and they’re very successful. Everyone don’t have to learn math or physics or language courses etc… maybe they have another abilities for example artificial or technological courses. Our teachers don’t reach their abilities, because; teachers learning the same things at the university so they just try to teach them courses except for their other abilities. So the students have to learn all of the courses,some of them succeed this but most of them are unsuccessful.
Later; after the graduating the primary school students go to the highschool. School name is changing but the system is same and boring. Students have to study harder for the university because;entering the university is too difficult to understand it. For example; a student who is studying at the language department in highschool have to study and learn the scalar courses for example; math,physics,chemistry,biology and he/she solve most of the questions in the university enterance exam,otherwise;he/she will fail the exam and have to study again again and again. But the student is studying just language courses. Why he/she have to study and learn all of the other courses ??? This is the apperance of the silly and stupid education system.
We have another wrong idea. Turkish people specially governers always building schools for uneducated reagions’ people and their children. They’re building the schools but they’re forgetting most important thing; this is teacher. The government doesn’t give the enough support to the teachers. Please think just a minute… We’re buying a mobile-phone for 1500-2000TL for our children and later we’re trusting the teachers who earn 1000-1500TL for a month with our chilldren. This is nothing except for silliness. During the courses teacher is thinking his/her economical difficulties if so how your children will be successful??? Firstly, we have to support our teachers,we must relaxed them with their economical and social difficulties and than we must focus on the wrongs of the system.
Finally; we want to educated country with its all of the people but we don’t enough care about the wrongs of the education system at all. So unless we try to solve this silly system’s difficulties,we won’t be educated in future.

2 yorum:

  1. Hi Uğur,
    I liked your essay and your ideas.Introduction is good.There are some punctuation errors in some sentences I think.There are some grammatical mistakes such as "everyone is not the same and don’t??? have the same brains","we want to educated country with its all of the people " , " Everyone don’t??? have to learn".There are some missing words such as "Turkish people specially governers always building schools for uneducated reagions’ people and their children","Turkish people specially governers always building schools for uneducated reagions’ people and their children".Anyway,I appreciated your style of discussing.Thanks for this essay.SEE YOU:)

    YanıtlaSil
  2. thanks for your comment sonay :)

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