Most of the people smoke in our world. They have a lot of reasons for smoking. For example; their friends,loneliness,daily stress,happiness and their’s good reasons to smoke everytime.
First of all;people’s friends who around them. This is the most important thing to start smoking. They say “have you got some problems? Smoke just one” At beginng he/she “no I don’t think that it can help me.” Later they decide to smoke just one because of their friend’s insistence attitudes. Later just one again again and again… Finally they become addicted to smoking.
Secondly people sometimes may be alone in their lifes. He/she can’t express their feelings maybe their difficulties,their pains or some social problems..etc to someone easily. Thats why their minds focus smoking or drinking automatically. They try to forget their loneliness or their problems with smoking. Is it effective? Yes allright, sometimes it is useful but it is just temporary solution to forget everything in life.
Sometimes people who work in tiring works,relax with smoking or they only feel relax. They always try to complete their works immediately and this stiuation is very boring and makes people crazy. Everyone is in the same situation in there and everyone is angry, so their best friend is smoking in that situation.
Finally; smoking is very complicated attitude, because if you get used to it just one;you want to smoke it everytime. Reasons will never stop. I’m happy smoke, I’m sad smoke, I’m lonely smoke, My girlfriend void me smoke, I haven’t got a good life smoke…etc,etc,etc… In fact; all of these reasons are just simple excuses,the real is if you start it just one time, your future is under risk completely…
hı ugur,I want to say fırstly "you will perfect " is wrong "you will be perfect " is true. do not be excıted when you make a comment:).please be careful ın addition "there are several reason for people smoking " is more suıtable than your sentence(I asked teacher).Lıke that there are some grammetical error in your essay but ıt is very expressıve essay to be truth..
YanıtlaSilhi uğur,
YanıtlaSilThere are some errors such as grametical errors but i like your essay.Your essay subject is realy important.Smoking is a big problem.I agree with you because if you start somking your future is under risk.Thank you uğur good subject and nice essay...
hı uğur and uğur:D ı think a good essay.some grammetical mistakes can be.it is mormal.your content is nice.
YanıtlaSil